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I love you, I'll protect you

Slowly it takes control of me,
It raises to the surface very slow.
A feeling that is slowly breaking free,
It wants the world to know.
The darkness in my heart,
It starts to show itself to the world.
The corrosion has start,
Slowly an ending stars to unfold.
I'm on the edge of good and bad,
Doubting which side to choose.
Slowly I'm going mad,
I'm letting my feelings loose.
But a little voice keeps speaking,
It keeps me from running wild someday.
The feelings are fleeting,
Every doubt goes away.
I'm pure of heart and mind,
I don't want to hurt you.
I've decided to remain kind,
And I know what to do.
I'll only be led by love,
I won't back down for fear.
Continue to do what I dream off,
Protect the people dear.
Even if I have to give my life,
I will do everything possible for me.
Love is the thing for what I strife,
Only then I can be free.
I will protect no matter what,
Keep you from getting hurt.
I remain with you from the start,
It's a promise not just words.
I love you with whole my heart,
You are my friend.
I know it isn't smart,
But I will fight for you until the end.
This poem I wrote because the guy I had a crush on (even though he was straight), never spoke to me after he moved (we never had any trouble). So I decided to try and contact him. Shortly after I wrote this poem. Up till now I have yet to receive an answer... even though it was more as half a year ago.



But now when I read my poem, I just start to think about a superhero... Somehow it is the typical way for a super hero :P And it was never my intention to make it look that way...

Is my unconsciousness telling me something...? :P
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xFoolerOfFilliesx Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's telling you something.... I just don't know what.....
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Mathios13 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
I also got that idea, but sadly I don't know what it wants to tell me :P
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xFoolerOfFilliesx Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are an awesome poet though :)
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Mathios13 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Thank you, glad to hear you like it ;)
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xFoolerOfFilliesx Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe. you are very, very welcome!
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