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Goodbye my love

Gave you too much credit,
I thought you were better.
Now I simply regret it,
It no longer does matter.
I will go on with my life,
Without you by my side,
You will no longer be my strife,
Not even when we collide.
I tried to act nice and fair,
I tried to be a friend.
But you just don't care,
So this is the end.

I will never say I hate you with whole my heart,
I will never regret trying to connect with you.
But I should have know from the start,
That you would react the way you do.

It was nice for a while,
It was fun for a time.
I don't need your denial,
I'm not the one who committed a crime.
I didn't ignore a friend,
I tried to stay in touch.
But you put it to an end,
You probably thought it was too much.
Well goodbye my friend,
And goodbye my love.
My last wishes are send,
But you are no longer the one dreamed off.
The friendship has dried,
The love is withered.
I have cried,
I am bittered.

Goodbye my friend,
Goodbye my love.
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oh, this one made me incredibly sad. :(  But, it so good. Strong, heartfelt emotions, very well written. :) 


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Mathios13 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
Thank you very much,

It's nice to hear that my poem moved you.
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
It did. :) 
Good job! 
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